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A Bite

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Staggered breath breaking the musty air,
Heather gray cheeks and blood satin lips,
An askew jawline hanging by ragged threads—

Here they come.

Sadistic trances as they approach—
You can just see the reds of their eyes—
Embarking on purposeless missions,
They're flooding the neighborhood streets.

Quick!
Close the windows and lock all the locks!
Hide away in the silent shadows,
And like a bat out of hell,
Muffle your damn screams!

CRASH! And a thump, thump, thump.

Don't panic—it's not alive.
Don't panic—it can't see you.
Don't panic—it's going for your son.

It's left the room now;
Hold your breath and lighten your steps,
Collect a weapon with your sweaty hands
And trail the rancid beast.

Down the hall,
And then to the right—

Rickety fingers stretched out above the crib,
Mouth watering for fresh flesh,
Humanity lost in shreds of rotting sanity.

Wham with the sleek silver baseball bat,
And watch it stagger.

Grab up the child,
Who's scared well stiff,
Step on the gas,
Escape into the apocalypse.

Breathe a sigh of relief,
Hold the boy close and tight.
I'll love you no matter what,
Even when he gives a little, hungry—

Bite.
:iconblack-kittenplz::iconsaysplz:Happy Halloween!


:bulletblue: I entered this into #Freedom-From-Words's Halloween Contest!:iconfreedom-from-words:

I originally had started writing this for #writingmadefun's Zombie contest, but they JUST closed it today. Literally, they posted a Top 5 journal only like twenty minutes before I was ready to submit. Oh well ;u; It's all right, it was my fault for procrastinating.

Anyways, maybe I'll find another Halloween contest to slip this into. I hope you guys like it. I did a bit of a more experimental style...and yes, if you couldn't tell by now, I love doing this—

As in this—you know, this—the dash thing.

:bulletblue: Edit! Oh! And I forgot to add a bit on the actual poem itself! First of all, no it wasn't supposed to rhyme at the very end. It just happened that way, and I was like, "oh okay that's cool." And also, the kid didn't just turn into a vampire or something. In my mind, I imagined that the father (or mother, I guess you could say) did get to the child, but not in time. S/he kind of "imagined" that s/he was able to save the son; he wanted to believe in a happily ever after ending. So s/he kind of altered reality in his/her mind, you know what I mean? And then it's implied that the boy is now a zombie and is hungry for brains. But if you interpreted this totally differently, than that's awesome! Tell me about it, if you'd like?


:bulletorange: More Halloween work coming soon, if you're interested! :bulletblack:
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HLY FREAKING HOLY HELL.