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One, two, buckle my shoe.

It should've been me. Not her. Me. 

Three, four, break down the door.

So many questions, but why, why, why?

Five, six, she's next in my mix!

I'd give anything. That's what I'd told the doctor. Blood, a kidney, a new heart—whatever it takes. 

Seven, eight, piece of cake!

Three minutes and forty-two seconds. That's all. I left the room for three minutes and forty-two seconds. But he only needed three minutes and forty-one.

Nine, ten, bye bye Jen!

Bloody murder, bloody baker, bloody butcher, they said.

Eleven, twelve, I'll add to my shelve!

Flatline, they said, nothing they can do, they said.

Thirteen, fourteen, I'm getting quite keen!

I'll kill him, and then I'll kill me too. Because its my fault, and I'm guilty, guilty, guilty!

Fifteen, sixteen, is this the sister of that bean?

I'm the trap, and he's the mouse, I'm the bait, and he's the trapper.

Seventeen, eighteen, she couldn't have seen?

I know all his secrets, every last one, naïve and foolish? I'm not the one!

Nineteen, twenty, now this isn't funny!

Twenty-one, twenty-two, guess what? I knew.
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I don't even know. Is there a category of "Midnight Crack Writing?"

Okay so we went on vacation a few weeks ago and we took a road trip and I wrote this while I was slowly rotting away in the car. I kind of went a little insane.
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I think I have an insane mind for how much I LOVED this !!!!

But hey that's oka : D
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~pianokeys457 Jul 25, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks c:

Maybe so, but considering I'm the one who wrote it makes me thrice as insane :D
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You're welcome.

We can be insane together \o/
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~pianokeys457 Jul 25, 2012  Student Writer
YES >: D BONDED IN INSANITY!
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:iconbetweenbloodylines:
Wooooooo !!!!! LOOK AT US GO !!!
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~cherrywaffle1003 Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's...scary, but it's still awe-inspiring! It's amazing what you can do with your emotions and imagination! Awesome job Keys!
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~pianokeys457 Jul 25, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you ;w; :iconkittyglompplz:
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~cherrywaffle1003 Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! :)
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~Contradictory55 Jul 23, 2012  Student Writer
O_O I'll say. :O_o: THIS IS REALLY DAMNED SCARY. :sprint::fear: OH MY GOODNESS HOLY HELL I'M SO FREAKED OUT RIGHT NOW OH DEAR HEAVENLY LORDS.
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURgh. :shudder:
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~pianokeys457 Jul 23, 2012  Student Writer
YAY I CAN WRITE SCARY HORROR POETRY :dummy:

ofajunaun no but I have no idea what compelled me to write this lol. xD Here have a hug :tighthug:
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